Vision In Violence

You're cheating and you're lying,
I can see it in your eyes,
You think you've won me over,
But you're in for a surprise.

The make up and the hair do,
The shortness of your dress,
The twinkling sparkle in your eyes,
It's not so hard to guess.

I worshipped and adored you,
So this is my reward,
To see you coming home so late,
Smelling like a whore.

You know that I won't say much,
You know I never do,
It's not my way to talk and talk,
But here's something for you.

I really, truly loved you,
The best way I knew how,
It used to be enough for you,
I guess it isn't now.

So here's a little present dear,
I chose it just for you,
A brand new gleaming knife, my dear,
So I can run you through.

No need to get all vocal dear,
No need to scream and shout,
Don't back away my darling,
Ther's no one else about.

Are you scared? You tremble,
Like a flower in the breeze,
Get down you slut, in front of me,
On your fucking knees!

Bet this is how he liked it,
With you kneeling down in front,
Sucking on his throbbing cock,
Before he fucked your cunt.

Well now I'm going to fuck you dear,
Like no one has before,
This gleaming length of Sheffield steel,
Will fuck you proper, whore!

Prepare to meet your maker,
You pathetic, snivelling cow,
The blade cuts through to cheekbone,
Wish you were faithful now?

Scary Stuff!

Frightening that one. like a scene from a horror movie. x
Deborah

Vision in Violence

Ha ha, I normally watch comedies!!! Thank you for the comment
Dave

Ahhhh!!!

This is twistedly evil and dementedly sinful writting!...
Yet strangely beautiful.
If nothing else, it's writeen well

With all sincerity,
--The Bleeding Bridesmaid

vision

Unsettlingly awesome!

lost for words

You scared the shit out of me! Well done.

Wow!!! Great Poem

This is like a revengeful poem to me... I loved it... great wat of expressing the feelings... and good verses too... Keep it up

The Dark Side

Nice. Lot's of strong, raw emotion. I've resisted going to the dark side - anger -in my writings, but I see from reading this that even anger has it's place. Bravely, and nicely done.

Peace & Blessings!
http://www.myspace.com/2twistedsista

Ah! Ha!

Taking a stroll on the darkside, were you, friend.
Excellent work. You really captured raw emotion here, tension and terror. I enjoyed very much.

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