Winter
Frosted valleys shine
Evergreens are frozen white
A cold crispness reigns
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A Nice Write
Dave. I think your getting really good at this Haiku poetry.
Debs
Thank You
Debs, all I can say is, I try!
Dave
you have a lot of class
I am impressed by the beauty of your poems. In so few words you create an atmosphere that enhances your images. I don't know if you've ever been in VT, but this poem perfectly describes the road between Barre and Monpelier - any many other roads as well - in the dead of their long winters. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Thank You
Many thanks Joyce for your kind words, I'm very pleased you could get something from this piece. Have to ask, what does VT stand for?
Dave
Vermont
It is called the Green Mountain State. It is truly beautiful in both winter and summer, though it is a lot easier to take in the summer. The cold can be excruciating.
Gotta have that drink soon.....
Dave,
You seem to be rally getting into this Japanese form - So....
koigokoro, ai, aijou, ji, ren'ai, aikou, suki, koi
and
ikei, sonkei, sonchou, keii, kyoukei
(not sure which of these is right)
LOVE - RESPECT
Gabe
You Lost Me There Mate!!
Kawasaki, Yamaha, Honda........... and none of them are any good for you, I know you're a Harley man!
I quite like Haiku, didn't know I would till I tried!!
Thanks for reading Gabe,
Dave
(Drink saturday night)
Drinks
Sounds good my friend - I'll get my people to call your people....
Love and respect,
Gabe
great write
david you really are good with this form of poetry,I've been trying it myself,seems easy but its far from it!! I know very little about haiku but reading your work has made me want to learn more,would you be so kind as to give me some pointers,any sort of help would be greatly apreciated!!
Rick