Species of me…

Beneath the surface
I found it crawling, slowly.
Some awe that moves me
Underlying all reasons
Depicting itself, unknown
My heart is paining
Beating my soul,
It’s anger.
Enforcing the gravity,
Enduring pain
It’s crawling under it all.
Fading all shadows
It’s sparking
And crawling underneath my soul,
Slowly and slowly…
12 July’06
03:15 pm

Species of me

RSPAYNE

I LIKE THE OPENESS OF YOUR POETRY,REALLY GUTSY WORDING,SHOWING YOUR SUBJECT
IN ALL ITS GLORY ,WONDERFUL STUFF !

thanks....

thanks for sparing your time to read it and moreover to give a comment.
Thanks very much, actually this is the first time I've placed my so called 'poem' on net, and yours is the first comment I've ever got.
So it is really something very special to me.

I've read yours There Was A Man

Don't know anything about poems so seriously cannot comment on it, but all I felt is...
It's something like a sweet smell, wraped in dusty stinky cloud....
simply awesome.

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