the calling.

lost in nothingness
I'm looking down, to the bottomless
depth of Life.
Hanging,
underneath my feet's a bridge
half way crossed, now I' lost.
To move further
I'm going against my gravity
every step I take, I stake.
The depth is screaming out
my name.
I'm escaping,
Life's calling.

Hmmm

Very interesting read. Escaping life, or escaping death? It leaves me thinking.

David E. Young
www.davideyoung.com

thanks and I'm just escaping...

thanks to give it your time to read..to think...and to write.

well to be honest not escaping life...yes I am escaping when life is calling but it is not life that I am escaping, nor does it death.
I know I cannot escape any of the two.
Even then I am just escaping.
There is a pleasure in escaping for the sake of escaping itself.. a bit awkward and confused thought but if you give it a moment it is simple.
think of a child who smiles just for a smile and nothing else...he doesn't know anything about it yet he smiles.
Just for the pleasure, I am escaping...do face it sometimes but that's also for the pleasure only.

perhaps like oblivion? It is

perhaps like oblivion?

It is so much easier to be be oblivious. There is nothing-no pain, confusion
nor is there joy
but sometimes it is good for once to feel nothing

or is it?

it is...

Thanks to give it your time...thanks very much.
there is no oblivion....I am forgetting nothing.
I am not sleeping....it is not the state of being oblivious....it is No State.
Be nothing.
then feel... life.

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