im a teenager and this is my 3rd poem. it was written for the girl i will someday marry. i would love to hear opinions on it. Thanks. Enjoy :)

Dreaming Of You

I love you, Kristal, more than you know,
There's nowhere with you I wouldn’t go.

With your eyes so gorgeous, your hair so fine,
I pray I'll be yours and that you'll be mine.

Every night its you in my dreams,
I say to the world "I love you" and scream.
But I wake up and see that everything's the same
I look around to find that nothing has changed.
It’s only a dream and nothing in it is real,
Except this love for you that I feel.

I know it sounds crazy, I was only nine,
When I first met you, when I looked in your eye.
You were so beautiful, my heart skipped a beat,
Cause I knew you’re the one that makes me complete.

It’s kind of uncanny how this is working out,
Our friendship went on and off, but now I don’t doubt,
That you’re the one I’ll spend seventy years with,
The one that I will laugh with and shed some tears with.
The one I’ll turn to when, from myself, I need saving,
The one that will help me guard myself by praying.

I see you and my heart beats really fast,
I get all excited, and wish it could last.
But it doesn’t, it leaves just like you do,
But someday I hope that, that fact wont be true.

I cant wait till I can show you my love,
That day when I’ll give you more than a hug.
That day when you'll see what I’ve wanted to say,
That day when I'll tell you although its cliché.

Although we all deceive and don’t keep our word,
Although we all mislead and say things absurd
There’s one thing that’s true that I'll always keep saying,
That one thing, that for it, I’ll always be praying,
To love you Kristal, with love that never ends,
To be with you Kristal with love that amends.

I love you more and more every day that goes by,
I love you and that’s something I'll never deny.

There’s only one thing in this world worth pursuing,
And That’s you my love, and that is what I am doing.