Though The Mountains May Crumble

i am a teenager and i just recently wrote this poem for my love. this was my first poem so don't be to harsh on me ;)

Though The Mountains May Crumble

I love you more than the sun so bright,
I think about you every night.

I think about the love we'll share,
Its too much for my mind to bear.

I think about the bells that will chime,
I think about you all the time.

The moon and stars just can’t compare,
To how much I love you, and how much I care.

Though the mountains may crumble, and the sun may shade,
My love for you will never fade.

Your smile so perfect, your words so sweet,
Just me loving you is a treat.

My love is bigger than a mountain range,
My love for you will never change.

I love you Kristal, I love you so,
My love for you will continue to grow.

I love you Kristal and always will,
The empty spot in my heart, you fill.

I can’t wait for that spectacular day,
when I can tell you, when I can say,

"I Love You! I Love You!"

And to all it will be known
that my love is for you
and has finally been shown.

first poem so don't be to harsh on me ;)

Decoy739

Happened to read your poem and was going to pass on commenting, that is until i noticed your age and the fact this was you first poem. Taking that into consideration, great 1st attempt, I have nothing but praise, please continue to write and learn from reading the works of other found here. My best to you and your love.

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