Though The Mountains May Crumble
i am a teenager and i just recently wrote this poem for my love. this was my first poem so don't be to harsh on me ;)
Though The Mountains May Crumble
I love you more than the sun so bright,
I think about you every night.
I think about the love we'll share,
Its too much for my mind to bear.
I think about the bells that will chime,
I think about you all the time.
The moon and stars just can’t compare,
To how much I love you, and how much I care.
Though the mountains may crumble, and the sun may shade,
My love for you will never fade.
Your smile so perfect, your words so sweet,
Just me loving you is a treat.
My love is bigger than a mountain range,
My love for you will never change.
I love you Kristal, I love you so,
My love for you will continue to grow.
I love you Kristal and always will,
The empty spot in my heart, you fill.
I can’t wait for that spectacular day,
when I can tell you, when I can say,
"I Love You! I Love You!"
And to all it will be known
that my love is for you
and has finally been shown.
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first poem so don't be to harsh on me ;)
Decoy739
Happened to read your poem and was going to pass on commenting, that is until i noticed your age and the fact this was you first poem. Taking that into consideration, great 1st attempt, I have nothing but praise, please continue to write and learn from reading the works of other found here. My best to you and your love.