neither a nightmare nor a paradise

breathing the same life with you is like a dream
neither a nightmare nor a paradise
a still reality; a picture; a painting
yet slow moving and more vibrant than anything i've ever seen

the colors trail as both my eyes turn to fly
from everything inanimate and to everything alive
i see what's old to me but now it's all brand new
depicting a certain madness; better than what natures high can ever do

chaotic beauty is what springs to my mind
a beautiful drug to breathe, a stunning beauty to find
if this is breathing then i wonder what i would feel and do
when comes the time when i get to bite into you

:)

I truly enjoyed reading this...I think it's wonderful how you've expressed yourself...descriptive words to create certain imagery in the readers mind is spot on...you might like to check over and revise the last line though...I hope that helped LOL...

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