Seasons End
the finale is here. a climatic end to one part of the hidden diaries.
a clear conclusion for these episodic memories... .. ........
a new season has set sail.
brand new stories to tell. all new romances to spell... ... ........
my seat is empty. i am on my way.
seeking madness. ready to deep dive into the fray... .... ........
episodes will pass. i wonder if i can still walk that line.
the one i used to traverse. with the complex design... ......... ........
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Interesting Thoughts
devilmed,
You put forth som intersting thoughts about how mind sets change with the seasons. I would like to offer up one editorial remark if I may: In the very last line I would remove the word on after traverse, it is unnecessary.
Thanks for sharing,
Pete
Thank you!
I'm glad that you found my work interesting!
Thank you for the editorial remark. I welcome them fully for my english grammar is not as great as others and it's always nice to hear from other peoples point of views.
Have a nice day and I hope you will enjoy the poems tha I will put up soon!
~If you look up into the sky for long your stuff will get stolen~