Emptiness
Frozen in a vast space full of questions
Stuck in past experiences that won’t go away
Wondering whether my path is the right one
Spirituality entombs my curiosity but awakens my creativity
I am consumed by emotion and seriousness
Glue encases my movement and I lay hidden in my dark corner
Shaking with emptiness and scorn
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Seems like many of us have
Seems like many of us have the problem of being stuck in the past.It's hard to forget about it ,coz it's a part of it all and without the past there would be no present moment.Our lives were written on the emerald and the path you took is the best ,there is no other possibility, if you believe deep inside of you that it is beautiful it would be for sure.
It was very touching and well expressed.Thanks for sharing it dgold.
OUADY E.G
kind words
Thank you OUADY for your kind words and understanding.
trust
Always trust that the universe steers you in the right direction, even when you can't see it. Next week, next month... maybe tomorrow.... look for the signs and then breath deep with trust, that you are exactly where you are supposed to be attheis moment.... nicely written, and " universally "understood..
Steve
(lost in the woods...)
My curiosity
I have written some poems that are on the darker side that I don't have any true connection to them... I challenge myself to do them... iit's an outer body experience... I don't want to pry but I'm curious if you feel this way or if you are able to write something like this with pure imagination... It's a very good poem that almost everyone can relate to! Good Job!
Ray
your curiosity
No worries about prying. If I didn't want people's reactions and questions I wouldn't post my poetry. I actually wrote this poem about a year and a half ago and came across it again while I was in the same space. So yes, I do feel this way, and have before. However, I think maybe I should try writing something like this without being in a particular moment. However, I do also feel that my poetry should come from the heart. So, basically, I might try doing a poem that is not related to my direct feelings, but I also like this kind. Thanks for asking about my motivation.
It's fun
Thanks Dg... It is fun to escape yourself and imagine another workld and try to write about it ... but the ones from the heart are the best!
Let me =know if you do one likre that!
Ray
It's fun
I will definitely let you know. In the mean time look forward to some more from the heart ones. I have some brewing in my mind at the moment.
-Debbie