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Is this Love?

Posted July 19th, 2008 by dolanf

I perceive you
In the most basic
Visceral manner
A pounding heart
A rush of blood
To my face and brain
And I cannot explain
If this is love or pain

Dolan Fernandes
2008

This was great Dolan,

On July 20th, 2008 repenter86 says:

I liked this, thnx 4 sharing....peace.

Thanks

On July 20th, 2008 dolanf says:

Thanks for the comment. I think its more about pain when you're young'

Dolan

the emotional roller coaster

On July 20th, 2008 aquadreamer says:

the emotional roller coaster of youth and love, nicely said

Smooths out with age

On July 21st, 2008 dolanf says:

Thanks

This roller coaster smooths out with age

Dolan

Really???

On July 26th, 2008 FreeSpirit says:

Are you sure about that.

Gloria

Doubt?

On July 27th, 2008 dolanf says:

How you've got me thinking
And I'm doubtful of my answer
I have that feeling of sinking
For not always being sure

Thanks

Dolan

I've a question

On August 4th, 2008 FreeSpirit says:

I was reading threw this again.If love smooths out with age how old do I have to be?? lol

Gloria

Age and you?

On August 4th, 2008 dolanf says:

Gloria,

In your case, my dear, the question of age is rhetorical.

You are ageless

Dolan

this is really good dolan

On August 4th, 2008 raskin says:

I missed this one but it is a true description you give here. raskin

Thanks Raskin

On August 4th, 2008 dolanf says:

This question cannot be answered, even with hindsight and age.

Dolan

oh,i just really enjoyed

On August 4th, 2008 mimi says:

oh,i just really enjoyed this

Thanks Mimi

On August 4th, 2008 dolanf says:

Even with the burning of the stomach and the dryness of the throat attached, it's great!

Dolan

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