Take me
Take me home
Heal my wounds
Make me whole
Give me room
Nourish me
Shelter me
Give me wings
And set me free
Let your love
Bring me back
Below or above
Desert or track
Let me touch
Your loving heart
Fingers you feel
Will not depart
If I must kiss
Your tender lips
I will not miss
One single sip
Day and night
May I always hold
You body, slight
Beauty to behold
Let me seek you out
Your plains and hills
Your lovely mouth
Where nectar spills
Let us meet
In abandonment
Arched bodies
Flailing feet
Let the love we make
Both give and take
Our longing thirst
Once again slaked
Dolan Fernandes
2008
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Beautiful..
A beautiful poem Dolan from a beautiful mind. 'Take me home' for home is where the heart is.
DEbs
beautiful
so tender and touching gives me faith that there are sweethearts out there like you dolan.
Gloria
I'll add another beautiful
lovely sentiments, good pace, almost like a cascade effect. I liked it. raskin
Thank you
I'm humbled by your kind words. I hope that all the attributes you think I possess I will have one day, and when they come, remain with me.
Love to all of you,
Dolan
dolan this is pretty!
Pretty poem with pretty words. i love it dolan.
someones a lucky girl...
nice write
Linda :)
Dolan
At the risk of sounding completely unoriginal, this piece is beautiful! Great write!
Dave
Thank you, Linda and David
Thanks for reading and commenting on this piece.
Linda, as to the lucky person
In all cases it would be me
Dolan
This was sweet without flaw....
this was a beautiful write and it was a joy to read, full of passion and love and unity....peace
Thank you
I remember a time when all of us accepted each other, warts and all. Someone there when you fell and someone to share your joys.
Dolan
Very well done. Truly a
Very well done. Truly a great love poem.
Thank you
Thanks for your kind comments
Dolan