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Posted July 3rd, 2008 by dolanf

Assimilating
You by touch taste smell and sound
For I cannot see

Its a nice piece,and your

On July 3rd, 2008 mimi says:

Its a nice piece,and your writing, haiku {possibly}is humourous,for i too can't tell one from the other.

Nor Can I tell Dolan

On July 3rd, 2008 willow says:

but I like it whatever it may be they are good words and worth reading .
I have only written one and I wasn`t sure either thanks for the read Dolan,Mine was named The Saga Of Two Knights more a play with rhyme really.
hugs from Willow

A mouthful in few words

On July 7th, 2008 ErgoIgoUgo2 says:

Dolan,

I envy your ability to write these haikus. I am given to far too much verbosity to ever be able to pull it off with any kind of positive result.

Pete

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