You Can Never Step In The Same River Twice

'Welcome home, where you belong', you say.
Where do I belong?
Here where I was born,
Or there, where my Brothers died?
There I dreamt of home.
Here I have not yet returned.

nice...

left me thinking, short but informative and interesting... i lyk'd it a lot
snuggly bug .x.x.

Thanks

I have recently returned from Afghanistan for the first time. Due to go back in December.
I am not normally the poetry sort, actualy quite illiterate! But have found it the best way to get the troubling thoughts out of my mind. No one who knows me would believe im expressing myself in this way. It truly helps.

Nicely Expressed

I had to read it a few times to get the full benefit. I think while you were there, you wished to be home, and now that you are home, you mind is still over there. It was a good read.
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its a good read..a peep into

its a good read..a peep into the heart and life of a soldier..thanks

a peep into the life and

a peep into the life and heart of a soldier..nice writing,thanks

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