I Wish I Were a Daffodil
I wish I were a daffodil,
a lovely little bloom,
Then you would come and pick me
and place me in your room.
You then would soundly go to sleep
with me in my pot,
And, while you dreamt I was a flower,
you'd find out that I'm not.
:)
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Hey Donner, Should one be
Hey Donner,
Should one be afraid of finding out that you were not a flower?
OZ
Not to worry,
I'm harmless, flower or no flower. :)
Donna Smith
Well written...what fun
You made it look simple, yet we know it's not.
Thanks for the fun poem. I love it's simplicity, rhythm, and imagery.
I Love It
very clever and a lot of fun!
Thanks, Don! Donna Smith
Thanks, Don!
Donna Smith
hey this so sweet,you know i
hey this is so sweet,you know i was pleasently laughing,by that way is that your baby picture you posted?its cute
Thanks, Mimi. Glad you
Thanks, Mimi. Glad you enjoyed. And yes, that's a picture of me when I was about 18 months old.
Donna Smith
I wish I was a daffodil
My late husband used to recite a verse very similar to yours - I have been racking my brain (what there is of it) for years trying to remember it. thank you for jogging my memory.
Tina