Insomnia

who calls my name above the whispering windsong
and rustles yellow leaves near my window
while the weeping willow sways beneath a winter moon

mournful ghosts of forgotten dreams drift
unbeckoned through my mind spreading ashes
and taunting me with sprigs of thyme and heather

beyond my darkened window lies a blanket of new snow
upon the earth and in the arms of naked trees
like a virgin's robe with no hint of what's beneath

still sleep evades me and in its place a cast of shadows
dance a silent ritual across my bedroom wall
and my thoughts ramble down a thousand paths this sleepless night

gently swooping down on dark wings of fancy
the night wind eases through the trees asking,"whooooo?"
I wish I knew I wish I knew

Insomnia

DonS,
This is great! You capture the state of Insomnia so poetically. I really like the imagery in your poem and it really clarifies for me the nature of my own insomnia! For me, the best time for writing poetry is while I'm experiencing insomnia.

thank you

I too write best or at least most often in the night. Sometimes lines just begin forming when you're lying in bed trying to sleep. Then, you have to get up to write down the line and then.......you're up for quite a while.
Thanks for taking the time to comment.

new life to 'insomnia'...

you've done the impossible: you've made insomnia sound enticing and mysteriously inviting! and this coming from a fellow insomniac... all I can say is that your verses have filled a simple word with new meaning... a wonderful feat for a poet...
loved the poem very much... smiles, shelby :)

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