Attention

My soul aches for attention
For my name to have mention
Though it is of sound mind
It wants happiness it cannot find

It yearns to find a way to give
But also wants a way to live
To be free of all guilt
As the rose petals wilt

It dreams of what could be
And all the things that should be
It wants things the way they used to be
With someone to console me

The tears stream down the faces
Of the crowds in the places
The people cry and shout
But silence comes out

The waves crash beside me
As I look to the sea
A place to find hope when all seems lost

Heatwrenching

The soul and heart are one, and both were gripped by the meaningful words you have captured in this poem. Do not let them escape, they are a great strength to the world.

Excellent piece! I understood and connect to it full heartedly.
wInTeR rOsE

thank you

I would like to give you thanks for your comment. I really appreciate you saying my words are meaningful.

Kat

Heatwrenching, yes true

I myself find similarity in this too.

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i am glad you find similarity... in a way... but it is a poem of melencholy so i feel bad for anyone who feels this way as well
Kat

HI Kat

I really like this poem, very similar style to mine. In this poem you have added great words and also kept your rhyme. Excellent, well done.

Angel

We just love poetry
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just replying

i just want to thank you for what seems to be my last comment
Dreams of Beaches

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