Symphony
The rain pats the window sills
the clouds roll in the sky
you wish to take a hundred stills
you wish that you could fly
the valley with a million flowers
the serenity of the sea
they make you want to sit for hours,
and in all peace be free
the wind whispers in the night
the shell against your ear
they sun shines so bright
the music that you hear
you hear the music in your mind
and leave the fearful world behind
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Is it a song? I liked it very much. I know that is a poem, but looks like song
Good job! :)
thank you
thank you for the comment i appreciate i when anyone takes the time to comment on my poetry
Dreams of Beaches
AWESOME!
This is a really, really good poem! I like it a lot!!
PS: Thanks for requesting me as a buddy! =-)
Thanks and Your Welcome
thiank you .... it took me so long to write because i wanted it to be a sonnetbut i am really happy with the outcome
Dreams of Beaches
p.s. your welcome
Beautiful...
oldaspirationsneverdie...7
Love the phrasing, timing, and word choices, all in all this is a very
entertaining piece!