Why do I love you?

as i stare into space
i think of memories
of you and the others who effected my life

and as i look to the stars
i see the possibilities
it makes me believe in fate

fate made us meet
fate made me love you
but why did it make me love you
if you don't love me too?

Lovely

This is a really sad piece, but beautiful. Just one thing: you should add a question mark at the end to make it more meaningful--plus, it's a question.

The stars give their support, guiding your soul to where you need to be.
wInTeR rOsE

=]

thanks for the tip i added the question mark
[your words will always remain]

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