words will always remain

All I have to say is I love your laugh
And your smile
And your hair
And your sincerity
It makes me want to hug you
I really wish I knew you
The same way as I used to

I didn't want to love you
It's not like I tried
I tried to hate you
But I just couldn't
So instead I loved you
Even though I didn't know it

Your the only one
Who I have met and the memory stays in my mind
Every one else fades away
But your face and your words will always remain
I know you don't love me now
Or maybe you do
At least I can hope you feel the same way too
Just like you used to

brilliant!!!

Absolute perfection of what I cannot convey....

=]

thank you for the comment
kat

*Grabs heart*

*Grabs heart* That was beautiful!!! My goodness! Again, so sad...I would love to see you write an uplifting poem--where there is no heartbreak or lack of love! But until then, I will read this and smile my sad, sympathetic smile at the truth in this poem that I know so many have experienced, even without realizing it. I'm sure I have. Thank you for writing the truth. It may not be happy, but I can feel my heart connect to it.

With a glimmer of sun, a whole world of possibilities come to light.
wInTeR rOsE

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