standing alone
When the times comes I stand alone,
Me, Myself and I
With all that I have.
With all I have done wrong.
With all I have created.
There isn't anything I can take with me,
Only the love in my heart and the
Confusion and my frustration, in this life
I wonder though!
Have I forgotten something or someone
Maybe missed what God wanted me to learn.
Did I listen?
The creation I have created for my life
No longer works, It no longer can dream.
Life is to much for me to handle,
God what did I do so wrong?
What did I do to those I love?
I don't trust anymore,
and there is no one else to blame, but me
It was My Creation, my decision,
my friends, my choices, my mistakes.
I know in the end there is only Me
to stand in front of my creator,
with all that I have,
with all that I have lost,
with all I have done,
with all the love I hold for all of you
But, will I trust him,
will he be there, when I get there
will he want something from me,
I can't give?
This is my life and I will confront it all,
standing alone.
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Very good
This poem was very good and meaningful. Here are some kind critiques: ~"Did I listening?" That didn't quite make sense...
~"It Know longer can dream" That's the wrong "No" ~"But, well I trust him" Watch when you say "will" you wrote "well" a couple of times. Otherwise, this was very deep.
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Beautiful
Beautiful sad, and tragic. Wonderfully composed.
thank you my friend
thank you so much looking forward to reading your work
God Bless You
Susan Jean