When Your, Your Only Friend

When your
Your only friend
Lonely transcends
Without end
It’s just lonely
When your – your only friend

good work

though this poem is short i really like it
it makes me feel sad for those who have only themselves
Dreams of Beaches

What a wonderful poem!

Very short and to the point. Yet it certainly captured my attention and my emotions. Very well done! I can relate to this poem's meaning.
Recently ended a love affair with a lady I cared a lot about, and the hurt is still there. I considered her more than a lover, I considered her a friend.
But she was cheating on me, she betrayed my trust in her, and now I'm dealing with being alone. Which isn't bad because writing helps to ease the pain...
Yesterday, I wrote Winter Rose a comment. Sorry for the misunderstanding, but the comment was meant for her. Anyway, having seen your name posted, I went to your blog. You've written some wonderful poems. Very deep! You're a very good writer. Haven't had time to read them all, but I like what I've read so far. And I promise to read them all.
If you care to, please post a reply. Thanks - TJ

Thank You My Friend

you are so right when you say writing helps
you are such a very kind soul and it was her lose
can't wait to start reading your work
right now I am also writing a short story about my own life
but you get so lost in it all
thank you and white rose for telling me how this comment thing work
confusion was winning
God Bless You
Susan Jean

Thanks for replying.

Good luck with your story. I wish you the best!

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