Double dactyls
Three double dactyls.
The standard double dactyl rhymes AA-b-c-D, e-f-g-D. These ones have a full rhyme scheme instead, AA-B-C-D, EE-B-C-D, which is more fun to write, but results in fewer of them. The opening double rhyme is also intended to be part of the poem rather than simply nonsense.
The first was posted in Pffa in Scansion Mansion under the thread Metrical Challenges #8 , which called for a double-dactyl on a space topic. If you don’t already know, the Hyades were five, six or seven daughters of Atlas (no mother attributed) and their name means either ‘rainers’ (for the season of their heliacal rising) or possibly ‘piglets’, and Zeus made them into a constellation as reward for nursing Dionysos. The Pleiades were seven daughters of Atlas and Pleione (‘Sailing Queen’) and so half-sisters of the Hyades (and the Hesperides). Zeus made them into a constellation to save them from Orion’s lustful pursuit. Both constellations are in Taurus.
HYADES PLEIADES
Hyades Pleiades -
here are the nominal
sisters celestial,
rainy or chased.
If you please, why are these
astrophenomenal
ladies so bestial,
so Bull-embraced?
2002
From NaPo 2005, day 18
HERAKLES PERIKLES
Herakles Perikles
queuing on Styx’s wharf
argue they understood
there’d be no fee.
‘Wherryman! Ferryman!
Diplodactylimorph
hoodlums and pollies should
go to hell free!’
2005
From NaPo 2007, day 8
VENISON BENISON
Venison benison!
Wildwood economy
turned into property,
sold for our use!
Joyfully join in the
ecogastronomy -
chop of the wapiti,
chocolatey moose!
2007
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If we don't already know...?
The full rhyme double dactyl is surely more fun to read, but can't seriously
be more fun to write. Congratulations on these.
Herakles Perikles is my
Herakles Perikles is my favourite here. Enjoying your blog, though I've heard it doesn't actually exist... heh.