Do I Give Up Now?
Do I give up now?
Do I decide...decide that that was the last time?
The last time I'd watch you walk away--
and be determined to follow
or to at least know why?
Can I call that the last time?
Can I give up now?
Do I give up now?
Do I tell my heart it's time to move on?
Perhaps now these 9 months can teach me something I never learned in school...
That love is not always a happy thing?
But does that mean I can move on?
Can I give up now?
Should I give up now?
I watched you walk away again...
You think I won't give up...so you just ignore me...
So do I give up now, if you never would believe that I had?
Do I give up now, and lose something I never had?
Do I give up now--or can I continue to hope and to dream?
...Though hoping and dreaming are useless things...
Do I give up on you now?
And on my heart?
Do I give up on you now?
CAN I give up on you now?
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I should...
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But I don't know if I can...
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whoa...
man oh man.... i didn't expect to read something that defines what i'm going through right now...but you did it! excellent. how did you do that??? lol ;o)
Kim
this is how:
I''m going through it, too. That's how I did it...
Consider this: Light and darkness are two opposing extremities--and neither exists without the other...
Love and hate are two extremities--so can those who claim to hate no one ever truly love?
A timeless dilemma with fresh make-up
Your poem takes an age-old, universal frustration and gives it some fresh war paint.
Refreshing!
Smiles and Light
AuraGem