Thinking in Circles
You are the one that I love.
I hate it.
I hate that I love you,
and I hate you for being the one that I love.
Because my heart's always alone,
and so is my body,
but my soul can no longer be torn away from you--as though it had been torn from me.
You are the light of my life,
and you brought out the darkness in me...
I've wanted to kill you...
I've wanted to hold you...
I've wanted to hurt you...
I've wanted to hold you...
I'm tired of thinking in circles...
Hated love...
Dark light...
Reason for me to live or to die...
I never realized love was such an ironic,
and oxymoronic, thing...
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nice
love, hate, it's all so sweet. Like pie. mmmmm pie. I'm so sorry, i'm getting distracted.
very good poem, light with the rhymes but a certain feel of words that compliment each other. It is the nicest and most appropriate use of ellipses i have ever seen in poetry...ever. It was so paradoxical and kept on track, beautifully arranged.