Panning for Gold
The prospector’s legs are knee-deep in the stream
As his eyes scan the sand for a small golden gleam
Brown fingers, hope lingers on adamant hands,
As he traces the shore with a rust-crusted pan
Sharp eyes catch a glint, locking onto it fast,
As hungry hands swallow salvation at last
His eyes hover slowly, the sun starts to sink
As the man scans the depths, the stream gives him a wink
The brook babbles softly; its cackles are cold-
The man doesn’t know that his prize is fool’s gold.
He pockets his treasure and laughs with delight
As a wicked grin splits ‘cross his face in the night.
To seek out pure gold is the prospector’s rule,
But often fool’s gold is gold to the fool.
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The Prospector reminds me of a pirate, I love the last line and how it draws it together as, yeah this guy is an idiot, but what are you going to do? He's so happy about his "gold"! I think I like the prospector more than a pirate, less plundering and better form. Your best work.
With all sincerity,
--The Bleeding Bridesmaid