Panning for Gold

The prospector’s legs are knee-deep in the stream
As his eyes scan the sand for a small golden gleam

Brown fingers, hope lingers on adamant hands,
As he traces the shore with a rust-crusted pan

Sharp eyes catch a glint, locking onto it fast,
As hungry hands swallow salvation at last

His eyes hover slowly, the sun starts to sink
As the man scans the depths, the stream gives him a wink

The brook babbles softly; its cackles are cold-
The man doesn’t know that his prize is fool’s gold.

He pockets his treasure and laughs with delight
As a wicked grin splits ‘cross his face in the night.

To seek out pure gold is the prospector’s rule,
But often fool’s gold is gold to the fool.

Reminds Me Off Something One of My Friends Would Write

The Prospector reminds me of a pirate, I love the last line and how it draws it together as, yeah this guy is an idiot, but what are you going to do? He's so happy about his "gold"! I think I like the prospector more than a pirate, less plundering and better form. Your best work.

With all sincerity,
--The Bleeding Bridesmaid

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