my hatred

Everytime I see you
Or hear you
Hatred rules me.
If I see an old picture
Or see a video
Sweet Memories past
That I used to hold dear,
not the same.
Can never be the same.
The knife you placed
In my back
Still hurts.
No sleep is sound.
Crying does not help
But, hate..
It dwells
In my once peaceful heart.
I want you to die there.

Wow

It is clear you had your heart broken. Hate will only hurt you, not the other person.

This is well expressed.

David E. Young
www.davideyoung.com

hello

Thank you David. I know. You are right. I am hoping writing will help me. Honestly, I feel a little better. I have to learn to forgive. Hopefully, i will.

Take care,

*Lynn*
~~^..^~~

trying reading blake's "the

trying reading blake's "the poison tree" - it always helps me to see that even if your hate ends up destroying the other person, it usually destroys you as well. but i understand how you feel, it's something i struggle with every day of my life. good luck.

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