a place somewhere here..
asleep
awake
nothing differs
still,i suffer..
walk
talk
nothin' makes sense
still, i'm lost...
scream
dream
it's of no use
still, no one cares...
love
hate
whatever choice
still, my heart aches..
speak
silence
just the same
still, no one listens...
so i just sit..
and write..
and feel..
so i have a place somewhere here..
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Antty Comments
The poem was very real and had a lot of emotions, I liked that about it. I also like the structure you gave the poem.
:Ants, your lovable ant