oldaspirationsneverdie...7 I like the style and flow of this
poem, like how you've presented your stanzas! Your
imagery with it's symbolic meaning which to this
writer carries a meaning no one but me, would understand,
for I have a gash, and sometimes I'm a real banana, had
a head injury as a child and I know that it may be
the reason I feel screwed! People are so nice and
say, oh he's not really crazy "I think about your line:
"but when these words intentions are somehow misconstrued..."