Could you love me

Could you love me,my question to ask
Or would loving me ,be to big a task
Do you think maybe ,you could love me
My heart is reaching, if only you could see
Maybe you could open your heart,enough for me to sneak in
Maybe if you loved me just a little, it's a place where we could begin
I've tried so hard to let my feelings show
All I have are words,words are all I know
The ladies all adore you,getting near would be a squeeze
I'll not beg for your love,but I am asking please

nice, i like the way this

nice, i like the way this flowed to ...but I am asking please

A long line

This is a really nice poem. Great words. I like it.

Dolan

Thanks

Thank you for the comment.Aren't we all reaching to be loved?

Gloria

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