Traffic
There seems alot of traffic on the road of life
The vehicles have names like daugher,mother,wife
At places the signs read keep to the right
That seems to be the lane where the traffic is more light
In the middle is a lane where you can turn
Do you look in both directions,use caution,or burn
At times you say caution be damned,full speed ahead
At times you look at the breakdown lane, with dread
Shifting into overdrive,you pass that slow fool
Passing everything in sight,you're so cool
You hit bumps in the road, go slower until you pass
The ice in the road send you skidding very fast
When the traffic gets heavy you drive a slower pace
When traffic stops,you look,setting everything in place
Traffic on the road of life will place you where you are
Somedays you travel a distance,somedays not so far
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Yes!!!
I like this alot. I know exactly where your thoughts were taking you on this trip.
My favorite lines were, "The vehicles have names like daughter, mother, wife..."
"At places the signs read keep to the right...the lane where the traffic is more light..."
At times you say caution be damned, full speed ahead!
I won't elaborate, but I know where you were going here.
I had hope
wondered when I wrote this if it would make sense to any one other then me.I just wrote it and pushed submit.Thank you for sharing your thoughts on it.
Gloria
You had some good points
Gloria,
You made some good points in this piece but I have to be honest, it wasn't one of my favorites by you. You seemed to be stretching a bit for this one.
Luve ya,
Pete
Dark Days
Trying to dig myself out of a dark place and back into fun.Pete I value your comments and your advice.
Gloria