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Rose

Posted January 21st, 2008 by frizzyfro12

~A dark rose petal~
It has fallen to the ground
The spell is almost complete

~A girl like a rose~
Full of beauty and sharp thorns
She could break the witches spell

I think...

On January 22nd, 2008 Winter Rose says:

This was a very short, but interesting, piece. It was very beautiful. I think you could do a lot with this, if you ever choose to continue. You could create a series of short poems like this going along the same plot to create a story. It does not have to be elaborate or very detailed, but I think it would be a cool idea. Nice job on your first poem =]

Love that never dies is good for all, not only for those involved.
wInTeR rOsE

I agree with winTer rOsE.

On January 22nd, 2008 tj says:

Very good idea. Write from your heart. See what comes out.
Tap into your emotions. Tap into your heart. Let the emotions flow out - that's a start.

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