Cameras in the air and chips in what you’re buying
Compulsory ID to prove that you’re not lying
For your own peace of mind is what they’ll say I betcha
Just cos’ you’re not paranoid
Don’t mean they aint out to getcha
A good man in a bad place.
Write as a vent, as a way to challenge myself, see my shortcomings and check my view of the world....
Me......
Man, look like a biker (Use your imagination) ....Yup nearly but more scary....Some tattoos, ride a big ol' Harley, work hard for a living.
Avid reader pretty much all genres, love all kinds of music, all kinds of art. Vegetarian.
Don't have a god but I'm open to offers....
Hope you enjoy something here...
And remember;
Just because you're not paranoid - don'y mean they aint out to get you...
Love and respect,
Gabe
Conspiracy
Clever and concise. Brought to mind my brother-in-law!
Conspiracy
Tell me about your brother in law....I'm Intrigued..
Love and respect,
Gabe
B-I-L
So am I, but I've been warned not to get him started. :)
Even with what little I've heard, I wouldn't know where to begin...the fact everything we say/do is monitored, there's a cure for AIDS and cancer, media cover-ups, fuel and energy problems, creation of problems to benefit their "hidden agenda." "The government (or order) is behind everything."
B-I-L
Sounds like I'd like your brother in law
Love and respect,
Gabe
fantastic
wow, this is fantastic. i love the rhythm (something i find extremely important in good poetry) - this poem is just put together in a fantastic way, thanks.
Conspiracy
Hey Elize, How are you?...
Glad you liked Conspiracy Theory. I tend to write in two distinct styles, one I call "Gothic", which, if you like tends to follow traditional form and an older style of language. The other I call "Rock 'n' Roll". Conspiracy Theory definately falls into the latter.
Thanks for your comments. Are you posting today?
Love and respect,
Gabe
I really love your poetry!!
well i have to say i love your 'rock 'n roll' style!
i'm not posting today, haven't been writing a lot of poetry recently, but please feel free to check out some of the stuff i posted earlier. i'm not too proud of some of them as i wrote them 6 or 7 years back when i was still a silly teenager, but you might find one or two you like. let me know what you think.
Your Poetry
Elize,
I have already read everything you've posted. Should have left comments I know but it was pretty late.
Anyway no excuses, I'm sorry. Nevertheless and for the record, I particularly like Broken, Out of Here (Sincerely hope you don't feel like this anymore) and Break Up; I love the vehement closing line.
That's why I wanted to know if you were posting.
As for that awful wanting to die stuff you might like Silence Impish Ravening Crows, It kinda offers hope and I know you've read Suicide in Hampshire so thanks for that.
C'mon Elize write something...it's good for you and you know it!!
All love
Gabe