A well-written piece.

Now matter how hard I try, you keep pushing me aside. And I can't break thru; there's no talking to you.
After all's said and done, you're going to be the lonely one.
What am I supposed to do, sit around and wait for you?
Well, I can't do that. There's no turning back.
I need time to move on; I need love to feel strong.
I've had time enough to think it thru.
And maybe I'm too good for you.
End quote.
So...maybe it's time to move on. And feel strong.
A very deep poem. Full of heatache and pain. I think many of us can relate.

I started reading this because it said Girl Scout Cookies,
and I've sold those before!
But, then I read the whole thing...that's really sad.
I would just keep the kids and forget about him.
Someone like that is a jerk and not worth it.
~Frizz~

This poem made me hurt for you. I am so sorry if this is true and real in your life. No one deserves that. Thank you for writing this piece, though. The only good thing about pain is that you get some good poetry out of it, huh? This poem tells a story of hurt adn pain, and it will go on to be appreciated for years to come. Life will go on. Hopefully writing this poem helped you to get rid of most of the pain, as I know it can sometimes do for people. Excellent piece. Very well written. My thanks to you.

Happy future.

The future always holds endless possibilities for those with open minds and open hearts, willing to take a necessary road.
wInTeR rOsE