i really want some feedback
I am posting these poems to get some constructive criticism. I really want to become a better poet and am hoping that this forum will provide me with that. I love suggestions, although cannot guarantee that I will take them. Please let me know.
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My only comment for
My only comment for you
Write what you know
Know what you right
It does not matter
Whom likes what you wite
As long as
What your right is written wright.
(Did you catch the intended imperfections?)
God bless
Preacher.
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of course write what i know...
gypsy-switched
how could i have missed it? such an obvious overlooking on my part... many apologies.
Hi, Gypsy
Hi, Gypsy
This is a showcase rather than a workshop, so offering crits here is at best optional.
If you'd like to improve your poetry writing, a very good way to learn, and then to hone, your writing skills is to post your poems at the Poetry Free-for-all. You may already be aware of it, of course.
Otherwise, that's it, at the top of this page - a link called 'Critical poetry forum'. Just click on it, then click on Enter here, then have a look around. If that suits you, be sure to read the rules before you start posting.
Regards / Dunc
thank you
gypsy-switched
I will check this in the morning... this flower is wilting fast. oh and by the way... i know... you have of course heard it all before... but I did laugh, out loud, so thank you.