Central frost...
Outer core...
the sun revolves
around my heart's galaxy
at times I become my own night
as I cloud my day away
Inner core...
I am half way out
yet I crawl back in
a hesitation of wits and wiles
could I ever win
Central frost...
the centre within my earth
I am frozen
hurting while numb
icy sun rises
will I ever thaw
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oldaspirationsneverdie...7
Great descriptive language and phrasing give this piece power
that gives rise the microcosm and macrocosm, the individual and
his world, the individual versus nature. It is a very interesting
poem due to the originality of the descriptive language, the
unique pharasing and choice of words, "the centre within my earth"
joins the individual to nature!
:)
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