End
Standing between stars
as they angrily collide
and then I perish
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Standing between stars
as they angrily collide
and then I perish
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For you Miss Oceanic, good piece, I like it,
Dave
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Many thanks Mr.Gibbs...glad you like it...and thank you for teaching me how to write haiku...the right way that is LOL...
I am still struggling with tanka...:(
I'm sure you'll manage!
And I'm sure your tanka will be good too!
Dave