Inspiration...

Posted August 4th, 2008 by heavenoceanic

tanka ( my first )

Noon heat of desert
chills me like sun drenched ocean
as you sail afloat
onboard the vessel of hearts
I remain stranded on sands

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Heaven

On August 4th, 2008 ErgoIgoUgo2 says:

Your first tanka sounds very nice and over time I will be sure to read it enough to completely understand it.

Pete

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:)

On August 5th, 2008 heavenoceanic says:

With much gratitude Pete...

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