My immortal flame...

Ardent love
you burn me cold
heartless passion
you flamelessly ignite
am I left to yearn

Ardent as the sun
I'm bleeding cold
blisters of my scar
be my living coal
to my heart
I am but its encore

Ardent love
you turn me cold
stareless glances
the fever of my chills
shiver me , be my spine
you the divinity
my infinity

splendid!

i liked this firey poem! makes me think of the guys i liked but didn't like me back...ok so that's kinda sad...but this was perfect. great job ;o)

Kim

:)

Thank you Kim...

Nice style...

oldaspirationsneverdie...7

Interesting love poem that reaches into infinity! Your approach
to this subject of love is original and noteworthy! I enjoyed
your style and unique word choices~!

:)

I do appreciate your time muchly...many thanks...

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