Of which...

Eyes...
the windows shattering my soul
I rather not see
he with she

Looking away...

How far could I see
what's infront of me
passing through
behind me

Embrace my day...

Vulnerable is the heart
that speaks without unison
with the mind
state of my kind

A state of mine...

Ever assuming
the unassuming
tainting the path of regret
should I be so set
never a mind
never a heart

My conclusions
inconclusive
bear with me
my lack of insensitivy

A casualty of a primitive rebirth...

Great poem...

I really like the structure of this poem as well as the way you use the inverse of a few of the words to get your point across. I especially like the part, "Vulnerable is the heart that speaks without unison" Great poem...

:)

Many thanks...

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