Origami
If I were a paper plane
would you fly me
around your world?
If I were a paper flower
would you pick me a scent
that lingers throughout the day?
If I were a paper heart
would you fold me
rip me into pieces?
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Origami
I like this, a very enjoyable short piece, thanks
Dave
:)
Thank you Dave...
delicate
This has a delicate feel to it when I read it. I like it. raskin
:)
Thank you muchly raskin...
If only!
If only, I were an if-
And paper were a lil stiff
I sure would,
While standing on a cliff!
Oh ,one of those...:)
Thank you for your time saifulah...
While standing on a cliff
look around
fresh air take a sniff
don't be long
go ahead and leap
BEEP!..._______________
Beep!
Thank you for the tip!
Beep!
Well...
oldaspirationsneverdie...7
Unusual poem without paper or with paper, your descriptions and
word choices make this an entertaining write! Nice buzz and flow
with a touch of that thing called class!
:)
Many thanks oldaspirations...