Unknown dance...
Eyes transfixed
into each other
take a closer step
till you hear the tempo
of my heart, your heart
would you dare to cross the line
of love's danger
or would you simply
walk away
One step forward
two steps back
turn around
Two steps forward
then what?
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love's " danger" is such a
love's " danger" is such a sweet place to be ! But it still takes a real man, to fall in love. Best wishes !
Steve
(lost in the woods...)
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Thank you Steve...
Dance
I do like dancing poems, I liked your description and how you put it together. There seems to be a story and your poem ends with a question that the reader can imagine. I like it. raskin
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Thank you raskin for your feedback...very much appreciative...