When you came...

Golden sun rises
fire of life sets
whispering winds of the ocean
birds flying overhead
stars and galaxies afar
your presence
a constant smile in my heart

I never knew
the world was so beautiful
till you became
a part of mine

Beautiful, heaven

a beautiful heartfelt poem Heaven well written thanks for the read from Willow

:)

Thank you willow as always...

love it!!

nice ending..very romantic..keep it up..

:)

Many thanks fallen butterfly...

This is really nice

You don't happen to write for card companies. You really write some very nice sentiments. I enjoy reading you stuff. raskin

:)

Thank you raskin...rejected by Holemark...LOL...

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