Farmer John
Thumbs in the pockets
Of torn blue jeans and muddy boots
up with the sun and down with the moon
Sweat on the brow
Calloused hands
the heart beats of a sturdy man
A job forgotten made this land
Tall oak trees and gravel roads
turned the fields and plowed the snow
what land is left here to grow
Upon the roads a fast car
Shadows casts by planes above
rather than what wilting leaves remain
planting bricks and neon lights
the farmer lays his head to rest
while cast across the sky a dozen satellites
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FARMER JOHN
RSPAYNE
A GREAT POEM NOT ONLY ABOUT OUR DWINDLING LAND,IT IS ALSO ABOUT THE ELEMENTS
THAT TAKE US AWAY FROM THE REAL WORLD,AND HOW THESE THINGS MAY BE INTERFERING
WITH HER NATURAL RHYTHMS.NOT FORGETTING OF COURSE
THE FARMER WHOS WORK SEEMS TO BE DIMINISHING ALSO.
-RyanJC Thanks alot. I
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Thanks alot. I really enjoyed the feedback and will try to return the favor. that's why i joined this group so that i can get a feel for what people think of my writing and more ways to improve it so if you ever have any other constructive critisism on my work please feel free to comment. once again thanks a ton!