I Cried Myself to Sleep

by: Huggy Bear ©

I cried myself to sleep on a bed of Roses and thorns....
This Rose now wishes she had never been born..
My tears fall like rain to my great shame..
It's my fault, I have no one to blame..

Oh, lover came back to me this very day..
I will show you how to make love in a different way..
With our hearts entwined as Lovers in the night..
I will show you things that will make it alright..

When I caress you sparks will fly..
They will travel way up into the sky..
The passion that is yours for the taking..
Love like this starts my heart breaking..

So come back and possess by my bed..
Lay your head my shoulder until we are wed..
Sorry, I made a mistake and caused your heartache..
Give me a chance before my heart breaks..

A Red Rose for my true love I bring..
I want so much to hear your heart sing..
To have you caress me and turn up the heat,
Until we make love and our eyes meet?

As we lay here together my heart wants to sing..
I want to hear you say you love me, that has such a good ring.
To feel your body all hot and demure,
Just makes my heart cry out for some more..

Oh my Love, I am yours..
Please don't close any doors..
Come back to me and let our love grow..
We will take our love and let it go slow..

On this bed of roses I'll cry myself to sleep..
Until you return to me, I'll lay right here and weep..

I believe you have a great

I believe you have a great potential, but you don't have to be that busy finding rhyme or whatever else. Too many lines seem to be fillers. Maybe you should try free verse... Good-luck.

It doesn't matter how slow you go, as long as you don't stop

Note from Hug E. Bear

Hi Nitta:
Thank you so much for leaving your comment. Even though I write for fun, it is nice when other people help you with your writing. Thanks again…
Hug E. Bear

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