"My Demon"
I watch him walk
all dressed in black
his hypnotic spell
sucks me in
he turns and stares
his eyes beckon for me to fallow
in the dark he leads me
his hellish glow guides me
his step are perfect
like a gymnast on the beam
his heels clicks are so soothing
and if I keep fallowing
hell is all that waits
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Spell-binding and wonder
Spell-binding and wonder winding, I'm not surprised so many people love your poetry, I'm enthralled already and I've only read one! ♥
thank you JewelPhoenix
thank you i re41 appreciate the feed back
You're welcome
It's good to know what other people think of your poetry, I love it when people leave comments on mine and I love doing the same! ♥
I feel the darkness of this
I feel the darkness of this poem inside of me. Nice write.
thank you
I'm glad you liked it! I'm kinda bad with comments, so I'm just going to stick with thanks.