Sacred

A moment’s time
Striding on air
A love was mine
No thought of care
A moment’s brief
Your hand with mine
Vows bequeath
Joined forever our time
Only the sooner
Not much of later
Illusions forestall
Pain the creator
Tumbles the wall
The moment’s alone
No longer of love
Gone now the known
And our moments of…

Copyright (c) 2008 Victor Duna. All rights reserved.

amazing

wow i really like this. it had a lot of depth and emotion
keep writing and can you criticize mine?
lynz

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