Storm
Darkened skies
Swarming clouds
Vicious lies
You have allowed
Taking all
A selfish soul
Never loved me
And won't let go
Rain the sorrow
Hides deceit
Release tomorrow
This heart be free
Through your storm
Rage and scorn
Seas of harm
Of strength now bourne
No longer control
Steal and take
This heart and soul
To manipulate
Sail with peace
Never had known
Distant your pleas
Riding out your storm..
Copyright © 2008 Victor Duna. All rights reserved.
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A comment from a newcommer...
I would just like to say that this poem is beautful. Coming from a similar situation, I find it really easy to relate to. The intense visual imagry evokes a sence of the deepest pain, which I know that heatbreak can bring. I'm sorry this is a bit of a useless comment, but this poem I think is really beautiful.
Meaningful comment...
Lisa thank you! My situation is a nasty divorce. My wife doesnt love me just trying to get my retirement benies..so now I am faced with seperating from the Navy after 16 years of active duty. She has also alienated my daughter and son from me just working through this crap through my verse.
Vic