Simile beside the fire
The brick trickles down the fireplace.
Smoke stains the walls and floors with soot.
Logs,
Burn bright-white with red-edged embers.
Flames,
Dance a mystic ballet of passion transcending,
Time,
Ticks away the minutes on slowly talking clocks.
Fire-stops,
And bleeds into cold darkness,
Like ice forming on the skin of your heart.
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I like it
I like the visuals, the flow, the end. raskin