Dewdrops
The dewdrops on the
Spiderweb sparkle in the
Early morning sun.
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The dewdrops on the
Spiderweb sparkle in the
Early morning sun.
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Golden-red, piercing
Eyes, orange feathers uncurl
As the firebird flies,
As it flies,
Flies,
Fly up firebird,
Fly...
beautiful
haiku, loved the visuals raskin
raskin
Thank you, capturing a moment is what a haiku is about, so I'm glad you think I've done that... Jewel
Lovely Haiku
Just lovely,
Dave
Dave
Thank you, I'm glad you think it is. Jewel
Jewel
Very pretty little piece of haiku. Don't be dissapointed if you don't get scads of comments. Haiku is usually appreciated but seldom commented on.
Pete
Thank you Pete
Thank you, I don't expect to get comments (though it's lovely when I do), it's a pleasure writing poetry, so for people to say they enjoy reading them is an added bonus for me! Jewel
Jewel
Very nice piece of Haiku. Often appreciated, seldom commented on.
Pete