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Moonbeams On The Sea

Posted August 26th, 2008 by JewelPhoenix

A rainbow dancing
In the night
Catching the prisms
Making them bright,
As if playing with fire
It comes and goes
Higher and higher
Twirling, full of glows.
I see it myself
And smile, for it be
The simply magical sight
Of moonbeams on the sea.

Light

On August 26th, 2008 raskin says:

on the water, beautiful sight. You captured the beauty and the lightness of how the water captures the light. raskin

Thank you raskin

On August 30th, 2008 JewelPhoenix says:

Thank you for your comment, that's what I was trying to achieve when I wrote this, after seeing the sea at night. Jewel

Simple, fast, enjoyable.

On August 27th, 2008 Wrong Virtu says:

Simple, fast, enjoyable.

Thank you Jesse

On August 30th, 2008 JewelPhoenix says:

I'm glad you think so :D, Jewel

ooh!

On August 28th, 2008 poetmaster says:

Beautiful image. You've created a very pleasant piece.

Thank you Paul

On August 30th, 2008 JewelPhoenix says:

Thanks for that, it's good to know what people think about my poems, the comments really help. Jewel

Thank you Paul

On August 30th, 2008 JewelPhoenix says:

Thanks for that, it's good to know what people think about my poems, the comments really help. Jewel

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